I also enjoyed the story, except I think this sentence sounds weird:
Perhaps it would sound better this way:There are no lights but there’s enough light to easily see by.
There are no light sources but still enough ambient light to easily see by.
Perhaps it would sound better this way:There are no lights but there’s enough light to easily see by.
There are no light sources but still enough ambient light to easily see by.
Could you please confirm these are the correct titles?